I'm trying to write this screenplay - I have it mapped out. I love my protagonist, I think she's really endearing and cute. I know exactly how this story is going to unfold. But the first five minutes are proving to be difficult. How do I want this to start? I want to have a narrator, but can that work without seeming contrived? Will it seem like I am trying to make a Jean Pierre Jeunet film? I love saying that name. I wish I could find a way to say it every day.
It is due in one week. We started reading each others' screenplays yesterdays, and I want more than anything to write the best one in class; to have mine stand out as being far better than everyone else's. I feel like the biggest idiot in all of my other classes. I just want one where I am the best.
So how am I going to do this? How should Margaret be revealed? In my outline, we go straight to her. But that seems too soon. Granted, this is a 20 minute short, but I think that, for the tone and pacing of this screenplay we need some time before we meet her. In one of my favorite animated shorts - "The Danish Poet," we don't meet the protagonist - Kasper Jorgenson until a minute in, and that's a 15 minute short. As a matter of fact, that's another of my favorites with a narrator. A narrator just adds a whimsical tone. More proof that I need a narrator. However, a narrator calls for beautiful, poetic writing that I don't think I'm qualified for. Oh gosh, decisions decisions.
I want to just watch "A Very Long Engagement" and think this over. But I have to go to class, and I have to figure out scheduling for project managment, and - OH MY GOSH, I need to leave right now and pay my Maurices bill. Oh life, can't I just create and live and be happy?
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